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One Bottle, Two Bottle, Three Bottle



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vodka“One bottle, two bottle, three bottle,” Andy counted examining unfamiliar labels.

“Bottles.” Miley corrected.

“What?”

“Three bottles. Plural,” she explained without looking at him. She just had taken up plurals at school.

Andy nodded. He was not going to school yet.

“One bottle, two bottle, three bottle,” he repeated.

Miley didn’t say a word. She was painting. It was one of those paintings where fancy geometric shapes transformed into human figures.

“What are they?” Andy asked pointing at the bottles.

Silence.

“He beats my mom,” Miley said unexpectedly.

Andy looked at her confused.

“He drinks from the bottles and then beats my mom,” she explained, her eyes still on the painting.

“Who?” He didn’t understand.

“Klaus.” She refused to call her mom’s new husband dad.

Silence again.

Miley kept on painting. Andy looked at the bottles.

“I have to stop him,” Miley finally broke silence, done with her painting.

“How?” Andy asked.

“If he doesn’t have anything to drink, he won’t beat her,” the girl sounded confidently.

Andy didn’t have time to reply. His mom came to take him home.

“Thanks, Miley, for looking after him,” she said and they left.

Miley smiled.

When Miley’s mother came home in the evening, the girl was still in the kitchen. She lay on the floor, three empty vodka bottles beside her.

And a painting.

Geometric shapes, two figures.

A mother and a daughter.

One bottle, two bottle, three bottle.

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To read more  about alcohol and its consequences for children click here.

Sometimes even a small dose is enough to lead to a tragedy. Just a note to all the parents, be careful, hide all the dangerous tubes and bottles from your little ones.

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Lena Toporikova
The owner, writer and editor of Colors of My Soul. I love that small island of creativity in the large ocean of Internet. And I truly believe we can touch another soul with rightly chosen words.

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  • http://1mind2worlds.blogspot.com Vinay

    lena, lovely story!

    its beautiful how much the daughter loves her mom, to drink 3 vodka bottles to protect her from being beaten up… a special bond between the two…

    a bit of innocence involved too, with the little boy and the plurals…

    good one! :)

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      Like I told you, I guess ‘lovely’ would be a wrong word here. The bond they share or rather what a girl feels for her mom is really a beautiful emotion. Yet it led to tragedy.

  • http://lakeofmydreams.blogspot.com/ Sourish

    wow..some one is really behaving like a serious citizen :)

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      I always was one, wasn’t i?

  • http://anubhav-mahesh.blogspot.com/ Mahesh

    Very touching ending yaar…

    I just wonder how do you get such creative ideas….

    loved it till the end :)

    And yeah the error i get is, cannot find the feed for the link :(

    Cheers
    Mahesh

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      The ideas just keep flowing once I start writing, don’t know where they come from :)
      Weird, that Blogger can’t identify feed because before it did not give such troubles.

  • http://www.pink-loves-brown.blogspot.com mehreen

    very touching lena…. loved it to bits :)

    keep ‘em coming!

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      thanks, sweets :)
      I seriously hope I will write more and more :)

  • http://mywhitewindow.blogspot.com/ Preetilata

    i completely loved it lena…… it is short, crips and absolutely to d point yet so very effective.

    i have seen so much of domestic violence around me janu…child suffers d most.

    it was too touching and deep. hope it reaches out to the mass.

    and yes spcl mention to the title of d story.

    i so wish u had taken part in the story competition.

    lv n hugs :)

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      thank you dear :)
      it often happens that children suffer the most because there is noone to protect them. and it is really sad..

  • http://Mr.Knowitall G-Man

    Lena, Thank you so much for visiting me today.
    How did you come about hearing about me?

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      I have been bloghopping and accidentally landed on your blog :)

  • http://charlesgramlich.blogspot.com Charles Gramlich

    Very effective piece.

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      thank you :)

  • http://intelclub.blogspot.com Amity Me

    very short yet it tears one’s heart…thank God, i am alien to such violence since childhood and up to now…

    you’re very good at your craft Lena and i would never tire telling you to keep on!

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      it is good that you never had to face anything like that… I just hope that things like this will not happen ever.. unfortunately they come repeatedly.

      Thanks for appreciation :)

  • http://flashfiction.in Aniket Thakkar

    I very touching story Lena.
    Poignant emotions portrayed effortlessly.

    Can’t think of a better way to get such an important message accross.

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      Thank you :)
      Just hope the message will be read and understood in a proper way..

  • http://www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com Geraldine

    An important and tragic message. You’ve expressed this in such an evocative way. Thanks Lena.

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      thank you for appreciation.. i hope the message will be of some use..

  • http://rachanashakyawar.blogspot.com/ Rachana Shakyawar

    Hi Lena;

    It’s an absolute truth of many closed doors and you have in a very unique way expressed the emotions and pain.

    When I was reading this story…i was in my own pace trying to figure out different ending of the story. And when at the end I read..
    …”She lay on the floor, three empty vodka bottles beside her…” I thought the little girl had in her mind decided to hit with those empty bottles on the Klaus head…A sheer tragic end………..anyway…its just an imagination…

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      Hi, Rachana :)
      you are right, saying that it is the truth of closed doors and many are just not aware of this, or trying to ignore it.
      I wish Klaus would suffer instead of the little girl, yet life always gives us different plots.

  • http://chaptersfrommylife.blogspot.com/ Farila

    Good blog and very touching. We adults sometimes forget we have small innocent kids in our lives and how our actions will affect them.

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      you are right, as adults we often forget that we are responsible for someone else except ourselves. Too often it leads to tragedies. I hope my message reached the ones who forgot.

  • http://www.lifeinfourwalls.blogspot.com bindi

    Hi Lena,
    You have a way with words!
    am in tears…


    bindi

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      Hi Bindi :)
      thank you for the compliment… i didnt mean to make you or anyone cry though..

  • http://cuckooscosmos.com/ Cuckoo

    That’s a very touching story, Lena. Very beautiful bond between the two. But the end is tragic. It happens. Not everything is rosy around us.

    I came to your blog after a long time. Looks very different here. :-)

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      first things first, welcome here! :)
      you are right, such things happen but we either dont notice them or pretend they dont exist or dont actually care till it happens to be of our concern.

  • http://jrthumbprints.blogspot.com JR

    I’ve witnessed the destruction; I know all to well how alcohol can destroy lives.

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      that’s sad, but the truth of life, bitter truth!

  • http://www.drunkthought.blogspot.com Nidhi

    Nice post.

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      thanks, dear :)

  • http://myonlyphoto.blogspot.com Anna

    Lena this is sad, you know alcoholism can be very creepy and scary for children. Thanks for writing. Anna :)

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      yup, i intentionally made it sad, thinking that maybe a sad story might make people think

  • Cinderella

    Whoa !

    Amazing Le !

    Loved the whole concept and the inspiration that created this. How many would see these things that are a part of many ppl’s lives ?

    And there you are, saw it, felt it, told it.
    Beautiful ! Loved it !

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      thanks, Cindy, dear :)
      I guess many of us see, just not always we are willing to talk about these things

  • http://www.catvibe.blogspot.com Catvibe

    Lena, this is brilliantly written, and devastatingly sad.

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      thank you for the compliment on the story… yet it really is sad, maybe sadder than i intended it to be initially.

  • http://herelaysmysoul.blogspot.com Soul

    Yes, it’s paradox. On one side, love and on the other, the tragedy it leads to.

    Touching stuff, Lena.

    And yes, thank you so much for the wishes.

    *smiles*

    • http://www.thecolorsmagazine.com/ The Colors Magazine

      life is full of paradoxes, isnt it?
      And no thanks for wishes, ok? :)